You are looking at the text of a Junicho (Twelve Tone) renku as it was finalised in a ‘live’ composition. You can follow the strands that emerged during the course of this compostition by pressing the link at upper right: Drafts & Discussions (Junicho).
The revisions are perfect, well done John and team!
Especially like rangeof emotional tones this one goes through, from the kiddie-pool back to the monster and the cruelty in the wedding card, then to the beautifully gentle nature of the leaves
Issa's Snail - A Renku Group 
Dear reader, welcome.
You are looking at the text of a Junicho (Twelve Tone) renku as it was finalised in a ‘live’ composition. You can follow the strands that emerged during the course of this compostition by pressing the link at upper right: Drafts & Discussions (Junicho).
Thank you for your interest.
John Carley
a lovely read that takes one on a journey of time and emotions…well done group
btw john i have sent you a pm on normans renku group
Yes! Fantastic stuff, well done indeed! 🙂
The revisions are perfect, well done John and team!
Especially like rangeof emotional tones this one goes through, from the kiddie-pool back to the monster and the cruelty in the wedding card, then to the beautifully gentle nature of the leaves
March 27: I have today received my copy of “Kokako” (New Zealand) containing this junicho.