You are looking at the text of a Junicho (Twelve Tone) renku as it was finalised in a ‘live’ composition. You can follow the strands that emerged during the course of this compostition by pressing the link at upper right: Drafts & Discussions (Junicho).
The revisions are perfect, well done John and team!
Especially like rangeof emotional tones this one goes through, from the kiddie-pool back to the monster and the cruelty in the wedding card, then to the beautifully gentle nature of the leaves
Dear reader, welcome.
You are looking at the text of a Junicho (Twelve Tone) renku as it was finalised in a ‘live’ composition. You can follow the strands that emerged during the course of this compostition by pressing the link at upper right: Drafts & Discussions (Junicho).
Thank you for your interest.
John Carley
a lovely read that takes one on a journey of time and emotions…well done group
btw john i have sent you a pm on normans renku group
Yes! Fantastic stuff, well done indeed! 🙂
The revisions are perfect, well done John and team!
Especially like rangeof emotional tones this one goes through, from the kiddie-pool back to the monster and the cruelty in the wedding card, then to the beautifully gentle nature of the leaves
March 27: I have today received my copy of “Kokako” (New Zealand) containing this junicho.